Another truly wonderful chapter! While I am too jaded to mind the brutality, I do appreciate that you included a trigger warning for more sensitive people because... DAMN!! Your description of Kevin's trauma in response to his bad dreams and what had happened with James Aiken was very poignant, and did an excellent job helping the reader understand how the poor protagonist is coping with this ongoing nightmare. It's nice to see the continuing thematic use of colours ("such a red situation", "glowed red under pink"). Somehow that last one doesn't seem to bode well for Amy, but you did foreshadow something bad happening to her days after Day 0... This is probably me being Admiral Obvious, but the description of the Queen in Pink seems to completely match the Jigglypuff Pokemon that serves as your avatar on your front page and on your website button. I now kind of wonder if she has anything to do with the "Mathman" in the story's title, as the incredibly chaotic personality seemed from the start to be reminiscent of your persona in a lot of your Hartshorned pages... The fact that every animal she taught Ava to turn her into was a bird was also something... Not sure if this is intentional, but I found it interesting that the Queen insists that Amy is a liar and cannot be trusted, yet Amy is actively refusing to actually speak a word about what actually happened on that fateful day that the Mothman appeared. It looks like my suspicion about the Queen in Pink being limited in her powers and having to use Ava to communicate for that reason are being confirmed, both in her weakness to being stabbed and in the line where the Queen is mentioned after the line about Lyndon Johnson deriving power from faking power. LBJ mentioned in the first chapter that the Mothman is a coward and only goes after what he perceives as vulnerable targets, which seems to be referenced again when the Queen says to maintain your composure if you see the Mothman... The humour was top notch as usual, the Queen in Pink's notes (The Mothman can take 4 Yetis at once. In the ass, that is.) and general antics being a highlight. The bizarre reactions to the Queen's lesson about beatings were very amusing, as was the callback to the curse of Hill Country when everyone planned to flee the town. I'm kind of surprised there's only two chapters left as there seem to be a lot of enthralling loose ends still left -- what winds up happening to Amy, what happened between the Aikens and the Mothman, the nature of the Queen in Pink, Ms. Daeth's current situation and how she knew what would happen to the Aikens, James Aiken's secret, what happened between Mr. Aiken and Mr. Foster, Lyndon Johnson's involvement in everything, etc. Very curious to read what happens next. Amy and Kev's interactions are always a treat to read. I can't say I agree with the opinions espoused in her tirade about how much better the lifestyle of the Comanches was than the lifestyle of modern westerners, but it was a very interesting read, and I could absolutely see where Amy/you were coming from. I wouldn't endorse a life of running around raping, murdering, and pillaging, but most of the moments in my life that truly felt magical were when I was frolicking alone deep in a large forest, often while intoxicated, with no other humans in sight, free and completely in tune with nature as our bygone ancestors were. Returning back to civilisation after hours in that kind of world felt like willingly embracing slavery. On another note, it was nice to see that the silly diaper story from the introduction suddenly resurface here. I have to also say, I truly have no idea what almost all of the mathematics that you used to write about was and don't have much interest in birds, but your writing ability was so admirable that I dutifully read it all anyway just for that reason. Yet, this story has given me a MUCH better appreciation of your talent than any of your work that you have posted on here previously. I am genuinely extremely impressed. I was excited when you mentioned you were writing a creepypasta, but I never actually imagined it would be THIS good. A few potential errors, some of which may just be me being stupid. "Vaccuum cleaners" instead of "vacuum cleaners" (I swear the former looks more correct than the latter, to the point where I actually had to look it up), "seneless events" instead of "senseless events", "overrating my influece" instead of "overrating my influence", "contrarion" instead of "contrarian", "fairytale" instead of "fairy tale", and "prejududiced" instead of "prejudiced". I am not sure if "It'll start talking about something then start talk about" (instead of "then start talking about") was a typo or just an artefact of Amy's Southern way of speaking. I also felt that some of Ava's dialogue seemed a tad too "mature" for her age, but I'm sure that can be explained by her having been influenced by the Queen in Pink, since you did mention that she did some research to understand words that the Queen used that she was unfamiliar with. Sorry for the rant, I was just excited and wanted to speak all of my thoughts on this chapter!